I will have the words in bold.
The Violin Door
I was walking along the yellow moth eaten path (I know weird right) as I came across something weird, and old airport! As I approached the airport I saw something odd, the door had a violin on it! I opened the door my curiosity taking over. I gasped! The airport was my airport back home in christchurch! But something was different. Then I realized it as an airplane swept the ground all of the doors had a violin on it! Suddenly a man walked up to me
“little girl”, he said
“hello!?”, I said confused
“come with me!”, he said
“I’m gonna go I have a plane to catch”,.
“little girl”, he said
“hello!?”, I said confused
“come with me!”, he said
“I’m gonna go I have a plane to catch”,.
And what was really weird was that he dared to call you a 'little girl.' What a fantastically imaginative story. 'Yellow moth eaten path conjures up many images. In fact the whole story conjures up many images. Have you considered writing a longer script and maybe including a character that travels in time in a TARDIS? I look forward to your next blog post.
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DeleteI would really like to write more but that was 110 words witch is how many words you can write.
What is a TARDIS?
From Hannah