HELP!

I wrote this on night zookeeper and thought I could post it on my blog.


“HELLO!!!”, 
“AMBER!”,
“ANYONE!!!”,
I was under a pile of rubble. Just moments before Amber and I were playing Lazer strike and suddenly they were evacuating us and the building fell. I was still wearing my Lazer strike gear so I could tell if I found anyone because the laser would find them. I was scared to move any stone because the rubble on top of me could fall! Then I remembered I charged my phone before we went to Lazer Strike. I pulled it out of my pocket and I saw it ringing it was Amber! 

“Amber where are you?”,
“I don’t know”, 
“wait you’re all ecoey!”, 
“so?”, 
“that means that you’re near me!”, 
“ok I’ll ring Dad”,
“good and I’ll ring Sam!”, 
“I love you Amber!”, .

I started ringing Sam (Sam was my boyfriend and my BFF) 
“Sam?”, 
“oh thank the stars you’re alright”, he said relieved
“yeah I think Amber’s right next to me I rang her and she was all ecoey”,
“she’s ringing our Dad”, 
“he’s on the phone to someone next to me so I guess it is Amber”, 
Suddenly my Lazer Strike gear started going red like I had been hit
“wait someone is next to me and I am going red”, 
“you mean you still have your lazer strike gear on”, 
“yea”, 
“look I have to save battery”, 
“ok its good to know your safe”, 
“I love you”, I said I was sad that we might never see each again 
“I love you to”,.

Suddenly someone’s hand broke through the rubble next to me!
“LILLY IS THAT YOU?”, Amber yelled 
“yes Amber!”, we spoke though a gap in the rubble not daring to move anymore rubble. 
“Amber your hand is bleeding!”, 
“yeh I know”, 
“wait”, I grabbed a sharp rock and cut a piece of my T-shirt off and wrapped her hand in it.
I grabbed her in a hug and she pushed the rocks and they fell on top of her! 
“AMBER!”, I screamed 
someone grabbed me and saw Ambers body and pulled it out from under the rubble and carried us both over to the side were Dad and Sam were waiting. Thats when it hit me like two rocks, I had lost Mum two years ago in a fire and now Amber. This was one bit worse than losing Mum I had seen it and it was my fault Amber was dead! 

I have been told countless times that it wasn’t my fault but it was. 
I made her make a hole in the rubble,
I gave her a hug, 
and I was pulling her towards me! 

Written by, Lilly Smith, 2018

100WC

This week we had to use these 5 words in our writing: Orange, Pajamas, Swam, Thunder and silence (kinda building on a theme here). The words will be in bold so they stand out. Please comment and follow my blog for more posts.

The Deep Lake

Silence, Silence and more silence I looked down at my orange pajama top and sighed. The rumble of thunder made me shiver. I heard Amber’s voice in my head: 
“Don’t do it Lilly you’ll drown”,
I took a deep breath and jumped into the ice cold lake and swam as fast as I could to reach the end where the Owl King was holding Amber captive. The rain water and the wind made it feel like I was in the sea but I kept on swimming as if my life depended on it (it kinda did). Amber was at the end I had to keep swimming.

100WC

Every week we do a 100 word challenge we have to write 110 words max. I found this very hard since I have so many ideas and not enough  words I had to delete around 185 words. 

Stairway to the sky.

I was driving and I took a turn and I didn’t see a truck I crashed into him and the world went black. Then I was looking into a big window, I could see what they were doing with my body. I sat there watching where they were taking my body. The screen darkened and I was scared. The screen lit up again but this time a man was in it. I just knew he was the one who was going to decide if I can go to where ever I will go. 
“Yo Lilly”, 
“Yo my go to the stairway to the sky”,