100WC

Hey Guys!
Yesterday in writing Mrs Taylor said that we were doing the 100WC!!!! It took me and Mrs Taylor all day to get mine down to 100 words but finally we got it from 141 to 100! Here it is,

We had to include the words:

Professor    Crocodile    Purple    Twisted    Difficult

Water gushing out of the rusty pipes, Professor Margo had warned me about this, my reckless self wouldn’t listen. The flow became more intense, I had to get out. Water was sloshing around my waist, rising fast. I had to stop Señor Macres and his twisted mind. I shed my dark Purple jacket, it was pulling me under. Water enveloped me, dizziness causing fading in and out of consciousness. For a split second I saw someone riding a Crocodile. The end was near! A hand broke the surface of the water, it was difficult, but finally I had a grip.

Do you like it? Tell me what you think down in the comments, I love hearing your suggestions!

100WC

Hi everyone!
This week the 100WC challenge prompt was ...When the smoke cleared... (I know creepy!). If you have read last weeks 100WC then you will have no problem understanding this one, but if you did not then I suggest you read that before this one: http: Last weeks 100WC
Thanks!

I heard the sound of the waves, I felt the wind on my face, and as the smoke cleared I saw the raging river. Suddenly a boat popped up and I climbed in and rowed across the icy lake. When I reached the island in the middle off the lake I was exhausted and shivering but I knew the Owl King was not going to show me mercy so I walked in.

¨Your Highness, I have brought you the Akaroa Diamond, now please let Amber go!¨ I said bowing at his clawed feet. I heard the clink of a key in a lock and Amber was running toward me!

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Today the 100WC prompt was the sentence: The Material felt like. I really enjoyed writing this one because it adds more mystery. See if you can spot the prompt in my story and comment the sentence I use it in!

Lilly no, you don't have to do this! I heard Amber's words ringing in my ears. I took a deep breath and opened the lock on the Glass velvet lined case. I had been given this mission by the Owl King, Get the Akaroa diamond and bring it back to me and I´ll let them go The Owl King had told me. I felt the Velvet, the material felt like silk beneath my fingers covering them in dust. Why did I have to do this? I asked myself. I quickly changed the diamond for a fake one and jumped out the window with the diamond feeling really ashamed.

100WC

This week for our 100WC we were focusing on personification. How do you think I went?


This week this was the prompt:

 Please enjoy!

Enchanted

I ran past the trees and I came across a wooden door! Having nowhere else to run I opened it and saw the exact same forest on the other side!
“Dangit!” I cursed but I looked down and I saw what had changed. The trees smiled down at me with their crooked branches, the fog lifted its arms as I walked into the center of the clearing, the bushes lowered there prickly swords. The fairies (!) lit up with happiness I just knew it was for me. 
They led me to the center, the darkness lifting. I opened the gleaming box and I gasped when I saw what was inside.

100WC

This week this was the prompt:

 Please enjoy!

Enchanted

I ran past the trees and I came across a wooden door! Having nowhere else to run I opened it and saw the exact same forest on the other side!
“DANG IT” I cursed but I looked down and I saw what had changed. The trees smiled down at me with their crooked branches, the fog lifted its arms as I walked into the center of the clearing, the bushes lowered there prickly swords. The fairies (!) lit up with happiness I just knew it was for me. 
They led me to the center, the darkness lifting. I opened the gleaming box and I gasped when I saw what was inside.

100WC

This week the prompt was this picture... 

 We had to think of ways our character was in there in the first place and how they could escape! 

Framed!

I was sitting in my cold cell in Alcatraz. I was put here because I had killed 13 innocent people, but the truth is I was framed! I was simply caught at the scene of the crime, they took me in for a trial but I was so scared I could not talk and I landed here! 

I was in line at the lunch line and sat at a table and everyone else moved away from me. So I decided to come up with a plan. I am so skinny that those prison bars do not hold me anymore and I can slip through when ever I feel like it.

100WC

This week the prompt was that we had to use these words, Violin, Eaten, Yellow, Airplane, Swept.
I will have the words in bold.

The Violin Door

I was walking along the yellow moth eaten path (I know weird right) as I came across something weird, and old airport! As I approached the airport I saw something odd, the door had a violin on it! I opened the door my curiosity taking over. I gasped! The airport was my airport back home in christchurch! But something was different. Then I realized it as an airplane swept the ground all of the doors had a violin on it! Suddenly a man walked up to me
“little girl”, he said
“hello!?”, I said confused
“come with me!”, he said
“I’m gonna go I have a plane to catch”,.

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HELP THE STATUES ALIVE!

“Hello Sir”,

“Hello”, I looked around to see who said it

“Hello Sir”,

I gaped as I saw the bronze statue moving and talking

“Wow it is so different from when I was alive”,

“UMM WOW”,

“Well there is my plane so I must be going!”,.

“Oh but you can't go now you haven't shown me around!”,

I didn't want to show him around I had an image you know and I want to keep it.

“Oh but I’m gonna miss my flight and it won't come back until next week”,

“Oh if you must goodbye”,

“Goodbye”, I said relieved

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HELP THE STATUES ALIVE!

“Hello Sir”,

“Hello”, I looked around to see who said it

“Hello Sir”,

I gaped as I saw the bronze statue moving and talking

“Wow it is so different from when I was alive”,

“UMM WOW”,

“Well there is my plane so I must be going!”,.

“Oh but you can't go now you haven't shown me around!”,

I didn't want to show him around I had an image you know and I want to keep it.

“Oh but I’m gonna miss my flight and it won't come back until next week”,

“Oh if you must goodbye”,

“Goodbye”, I said relieved

100WC

This week the prompt was "As the flame flickered and then went out" it will be in bold so you can see where I used it. If you read last week's 100WC you will know that this was  a take off from that, if not I would recommend you read that first.

The Owl King

I leant over to my bedside table my back straining. I lit my candle and I sat back in bed and siyed I was so scared. Why was I awake? The night was still outside suddenly I screamed as the flame flickered and then went out. I heard nothing but then there was a swoosh of wings and a human sized owl came and grabbed my favorite necklace leaving a note in its place. 

To Lilly,

If you ever want to see Amber again come to my castle and swim in the lake.

From The Owl King 

Amber he had Amber! I had to go and save her. But how?

100WC

This week we had to use these 5 words in our writing: Orange, Pajamas, Swam, Thunder and silence (kinda building on a theme here). The words will be in bold so they stand out. Please comment and follow my blog for more posts.

The Deep Lake

Silence, Silence and more silence I looked down at my orange pajama top and sighed. The rumble of thunder made me shiver. I heard Amber’s voice in my head: 
“Don’t do it Lilly you’ll drown”,
I took a deep breath and jumped into the ice cold lake and swam as fast as I could to reach the end where the Owl King was holding Amber captive. The rain water and the wind made it feel like I was in the sea but I kept on swimming as if my life depended on it (it kinda did). Amber was at the end I had to keep swimming.

100WC

Every week we do a 100 word challenge we have to write 110 words max. I found this very hard since I have so many ideas and not enough  words I had to delete around 185 words. 

Stairway to the sky.

I was driving and I took a turn and I didn’t see a truck I crashed into him and the world went black. Then I was looking into a big window, I could see what they were doing with my body. I sat there watching where they were taking my body. The screen darkened and I was scared. The screen lit up again but this time a man was in it. I just knew he was the one who was going to decide if I can go to where ever I will go. 
“Yo Lilly”, 
“Yo my go to the stairway to the sky”,