HELP!

I wrote this on night zookeeper and thought I could post it on my blog.


“HELLO!!!”, 
“AMBER!”,
“ANYONE!!!”,
I was under a pile of rubble. Just moments before Amber and I were playing Lazer strike and suddenly they were evacuating us and the building fell. I was still wearing my Lazer strike gear so I could tell if I found anyone because the laser would find them. I was scared to move any stone because the rubble on top of me could fall! Then I remembered I charged my phone before we went to Lazer Strike. I pulled it out of my pocket and I saw it ringing it was Amber! 

“Amber where are you?”,
“I don’t know”, 
“wait you’re all ecoey!”, 
“so?”, 
“that means that you’re near me!”, 
“ok I’ll ring Dad”,
“good and I’ll ring Sam!”, 
“I love you Amber!”, .

I started ringing Sam (Sam was my boyfriend and my BFF) 
“Sam?”, 
“oh thank the stars you’re alright”, he said relieved
“yeah I think Amber’s right next to me I rang her and she was all ecoey”,
“she’s ringing our Dad”, 
“he’s on the phone to someone next to me so I guess it is Amber”, 
Suddenly my Lazer Strike gear started going red like I had been hit
“wait someone is next to me and I am going red”, 
“you mean you still have your lazer strike gear on”, 
“yea”, 
“look I have to save battery”, 
“ok its good to know your safe”, 
“I love you”, I said I was sad that we might never see each again 
“I love you to”,.

Suddenly someone’s hand broke through the rubble next to me!
“LILLY IS THAT YOU?”, Amber yelled 
“yes Amber!”, we spoke though a gap in the rubble not daring to move anymore rubble. 
“Amber your hand is bleeding!”, 
“yeh I know”, 
“wait”, I grabbed a sharp rock and cut a piece of my T-shirt off and wrapped her hand in it.
I grabbed her in a hug and she pushed the rocks and they fell on top of her! 
“AMBER!”, I screamed 
someone grabbed me and saw Ambers body and pulled it out from under the rubble and carried us both over to the side were Dad and Sam were waiting. Thats when it hit me like two rocks, I had lost Mum two years ago in a fire and now Amber. This was one bit worse than losing Mum I had seen it and it was my fault Amber was dead! 

I have been told countless times that it wasn’t my fault but it was. 
I made her make a hole in the rubble,
I gave her a hug, 
and I was pulling her towards me! 

Written by, Lilly Smith, 2018