This week the 100WC challenge prompt was ...When the smoke cleared... (I know creepy!). If you have read last weeks 100WC then you will have no problem understanding this one, but if you did not then I suggest you read that before this one: http: Last weeks 100WC
Thanks!
I heard the sound of the waves, I felt the wind on my face, and as the smoke cleared I saw the raging river. Suddenly a boat popped up and I climbed in and rowed across the icy lake. When I reached the island in the middle off the lake I was exhausted and shivering but I knew the Owl King was not going to show me mercy so I walked in.
¨Your Highness, I have brought you the Akaroa Diamond, now please let Amber go!¨ I said bowing at his clawed feet. I heard the clink of a key in a lock and Amber was running toward me!
I continue to be astounded at the imaginative use of one hundred words. You have managed to set a scene and introduce characters that maintain this reader's interest. You have included a range of adjectives that really help paint a mental picture. I love the way you have named the object the 'Akaroa Diamond.' I hope there will be more writing featuring these characters.
ReplyDeleteI look forward to your next blog post.
Hi Mr Robertson,
DeleteThanks so much! I love using words that are close to home. If you want more of my stories check out my other blog:
http://harrypottershortstories1.blogspot.co.nz/
I know it is named Harry Potter but I plan on adding different stories.
Thanks again!
Hannah